Flying Frogs

It was a stary night around 8.00pm in London on Tuesday I was on a lilly pad sleeping.All of sudden I started floating it was so amazing.I went past a small house and waved to the person inside.It was really cold I bumped into a white sheet.It got women. It was so cool.I went to a purple house and got the remote and changed the channel with my tounge.

There were lost of frogs in the house an a old women was sleeping on her chair we
exited the house and went past big Ben then I went to the city and started to fall. I dived in to
the swamp and it was all over.Detectives stared to be nosey and hunted as down.

Next Tuesday around 7.58am pig started to fly lucky them.

This is my draft piece of writing. Can you make a comment and let me know what I did well and what I can improve on?

My Speech

This is my speech of my frog Timmy and Sophia.

I can speak loud and clearly.

I need to work on more eye contact.

Maths

I had 36 feijoas and I had to share them between 3 people evenly. How many would each person get?
I had 21 bannas and I ate 17 how many was left?

How We Hear Sound

I'm going to tell you how we hear sound.
Sound waves go into your pinna and goes throw the ear canal and makes the ear drum vibrate. It
goes to the ossicles which makes an electric  pulse that goes to the cochlea then goes to the brain.
I hope you learnt something.

White Kiwi

We must protect the rare white kiwi because they are in danger.

Exploring Sound

Our topic this term is Exploring Sound.
I know already the sound waves go in your ear and makes a vibration on your ear drumb and makes a electric pulse and goes to your brain.
I want to know how sound makes different noises.